Not much on writing prose myself (a character flaw, assuredly), but this one’s pretty good. My only critique is that it should have ended with a more uplifting, forward-looking stanza.
To pour a poem onto page
select a well of ink
try one with mood
or brooding shrewd
perhaps a wistful ilk
Some brands can have a tad of fear
or fourteen heartbeats loud
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